As I experiment with the order of my paragraphs it seems like some can be rearranged while others cannot. The introduction is consistent with its spot because of the thesis and my introduction of thoughts. I also learned that I may need to explain things more because I have a tendency to assume that people know what I am talking about, but it's actually the complete opposite. The middle paragraphs seem like they can be interchangeable because they each introduce thoughts and ideas. I may play around with changing the order in my final draft.
It helped me to re-see my essay in that I am always so focused on things being where I first put them that I am afraid to change the location. It also helped me to see where I needed to explain more because just reading some paragraphs by them selves was very confusing. Overall today's class activities were good for me because it helps getting others to revise my paper. That is why the re-organizing of the paragraphs was good, because it helped me to see my essay in a different way.